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EXTRA EXTRA - DEATH OF A SAINT

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We appreciate the help guys, but we know these mock papers aren't perfect. We're not trying to post anything to actually be printed, just get the basic story across. ; )


Newspaper Template found here: [link]
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In line five, "had" isn't necessary. Line twelve, "from" should be "over" or "concerning".
Second paragraph, period after "this morning".
Last paragraph, "lost" should be "loss". "Government" doesn't need to be capitalized. "Targeted" should be "target".
<sub<Sorry I keep correcting grammar; I just think it'd look better. OTL

I fine amusement in Saint's being younger than my parents. |D;;

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