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EXTRA EXTRA - TERRORIST ATTACK

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Kudo's to whoever get's the correlation on the paper's date. ;D


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First article, second column, it should be "explosion" rather than "explosive". It makes more sense. Police set up "parameters", too, not "perimeters".
Middle article, "abated" means to omit...you mean "bated", which is more like to restrain or moderate.

Other than the minor mistakes, these papers are looking really sharp; I like them. ;D

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